Work progress 10/07/2018 – 10/13/2018

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I’ve realized that I’m probably not going to be satisfied with how the drawings come out. I mean I can’t expect to draw something perfect if  I haven’t done it before and knowing that makes me feel like I need to fix the drawings. I look at these and although I like them I see so many “mistakes”, and so far. I think I have to work a little harder on composition and consistency. As far as the story goes, I feel like I’m having fun just drawing/writing the story as I go, the only hard part is coming up with scenes that I like and think are worth putting that effort into them. I want to draw stuff that is fun to me and that I would love to see.

Not sure if that first drawing is a little confusing and makes me think that drawing night scenes is going to be a little hard and I’m going to have to work on that. I also don’t know if the scene is too clear, my wife told me it looks like it’s inside instead of outside so I might have to redraw that one again. I do like some of the details I put in that one and I think is very well balanced.

I really like the second drawing and think that it’s pretty much a finished panel and all it needs is inking. But at the same time I’m not putting any thought to the overall composition of the finished product. I don’t know how the pages are going to look and how I will be arranging the panles on the page. But for now I’m just going to focus on writing/drawing the story in pencil and I guess that I will be doing a lot of editing once it’s finish with this stage.

Not sure about that last scene here. I’m not to happy with some of the characters and even the background. We’ll see if I end up redrawing that one.

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I really like how this one came out.  Something about the lines and the style of the drawing that makes me hope that I could do every drawing just like this one. I Feel like all I have to do here is ink. I drew panel borders around it but the thing is I’m using copy paper to do all this drawings and for now I plan to put it together using Gimp so this drawing might become part of a more elaborate panel or it might stay like that or I might need to modify it to make it fit into a page and thus need to add stuff to it or something like that. I’ve been using just regular pencils but in this drawing I learned that I feel more comfortable drawing when the line is very thin and consistent, so I’m thinking about getting a mechanical pencil.

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I spent almost all my free time trying to make this drawing right here and I’m still not happy with it.  Not sure what to do with the background, a lot of lines look so bad and stuff is just disproportionate all over the place. The hardest part about this drawing for me besides the pool of course is the with the shot gun. The thing about this scene for me is the pose of the character with the shotgun. To begin I didn’t know how to draw a shot gun so I had to look that up and learn how to draw it, then I had to start constructing the posture of the character while holding the gun with standard cartooning methods like using circles, lines and foreshortening to get the pose as close as I wanted it to be before I started fleshing the character out. I tried it a few times and was getting really frustrated and decided to just draw the scene with stick figures so that I would be able to see where I wanted the arms to go and how I wanted the legs to look.

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Not to mention that I want another character in this scene and there might be some dialogue so I will most likely have take some time to think about the composition of this panel to include the three characters and a word balloon in a way that I can also have enough background and props to make it look like I want it to.

I also took some time to try and improve a panel I had already done, well, don’t know if I should say improve, maybe just change because as I draw I start seeing things and realize I want them to look a certain way and why not put the effort into learning how to make it look that way and improve my drawings. panel006

I also want to use some shading and stuff to give my drawings some more depth so I decided to pretty much just start playing with the drawing on Gimp.

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I am not 100% happy with this but it does look a little bit how I want it to look when it comes to shading and texture. I’m going to have to do some further research I think because I don’t feel like this looks exactly how it should look for my personal taste. I mean I know I can just do the lines and whatnot, I’ve seen published work that is all lines, but, it’s just a personal preference and why not. I’m having fun. I’m probably going to re draw this panel because I used a dip pen to ink it that is too thick and I ended up loosing a lot of details. Still don’t know if I’ll get a smaller nib or go with markers.

So, I’m pretty much drawing in order of events of whatever comes to mind. I don’t have a story written, I do have several random situations sketched out but they’re not really part of a coherent story.  Meaning that none of them have anything to do with each other. But I still think I will use them some how for the story. I’m pretty much improvising and writing the story as I go. Of course it’s the first time I actually try to do this so I can’t be sure how this thing will turn out. I’m using pretty inexpensive tools and materials, you know, copy paper, cheap pencils, and Gimp and a good but affordable scanner. I would tell anyone to use copy paper and pencils to start drawing comics because if you don’t like the drawing you just made you can just throw it away and start again without feeling that you’re wasting money on expensive art materials and stuff and can freely draw whatever and HAVE FUN.

 

Learning to draw girls

One of the things I’ve always wanted to do is write a graphic novel, or at least write short graphic stories and at some point publish a collection of them.  I while back I made a short web comic series titled Skate Nerds about three friends pretty much just talking nonsense.  Although the drawings were very simplistic I enjoyed the actual work and all it involves.  And Its just like Ivan Brunetti says, making comics is mostly work.  But at the end of the day I felt very satisfied for having put in that work and have that finished product.  I never really draw comics, the stuff I draw is very cartoony but everything is stream of consciousness. The few times I’ve tried to draw longer and a bit more complex stories I don’t like the way it turns out.  I’m always getting weird and crazy ideas for stories and I jot em down real quick and save them but I don’t know how to draw a lot of things. And I know the drawings don’t have to be prefect, I know believe me but, I have an end product in my mind and what I really need to do is teach my self to draw what I don’t know how to draw. I’m going to start with girls. I never draw girls, I suck at it, it pisses me off that I don’t so I’m going to have to get on it and start practicing.  practice sketches001practice sketches002

With these heads I started by following steps but quickly tried to find my style like with the neck. I really like the three heads on the bottom right of the first page but the hair is pretty much modeled from a cartooning book. They’re cool I love them and can be used to make some funny stuff happen but although I’m aiming for a certain style of cartoons I also want to make contemporary looking stuff so what I did was that I did a search in Pinterest for “modern women hairstyles”. The two inked heads on the second page were drawn by looking at photos from that search result. I also created a new Pinterest board for “Girls Hairstyles” to use as reference.

For theses sketches I used prior knowledge of head construction but I also used the book Cartooning The Head and Figure by Jack Hamm because I get really blocked when it comes to creating different looks and stuff and that book has a bunch of examples and, you know, like Austin Kleon says, Steal like an Artist. My end goal here is bringing my stories to life in comic book form, I feel very passionate about cartoons and cartooning in general, and I also love Film and strange stories. I also love old style cartoons so all of the books I own about cartooning are older books or have that style. If you stumble into this post and by a weird chance you’re looking for a simple book to get you started with drawing cartoons I recommend Character Design by Sherm Cohen, it’s great.

 

A message of hope.

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I started drawing this guy a couple of days ago brainstorming and doodling trying to come up with an idea for sort of a comic book type project I’ve been wanting to make for some years now. The thing I like the most is it’s simplicity. I can draw this a hundred times over before it gets boring and that gives me a tool and more time to have fun experimenting with the story. The other day I listened to the deconstructing comics podcast episode about the Ivan Brunetti book “Cartooning: Philosophy and Practice” and the hosts seemed to not fully grasp the idea behind this book. The idea is simply to help the student tap into his creativity, he uses the medium of comics or cartooning to do so because that’s what he does. But if you can fully get the message of the book you can clearly see the book can help you in a way where you can actually curve your creativity even if it’s doing something other than drawing cartoons. One of the things he encourages is to create a character using simple lines and shapes. Simplify the drawing. Something that, if you read the “Famous Artists Cartoon Course” They emphasize in simplicity when cartooning and those guys where masters. I really enjoy Tom Gauld’s style. I drew this with a cheap marker and crayola colored pencils and I’m thinking about incorporating watercolor.